I have been working on desriptive writing and I am trying to include Seeing - Hearing - Feeling into my work to give the reader a picture in their head.
Greetings Storm, Your post on the lost castle was excellent! As a year 7 I am really impressed on the amount of effort you put into the making of your DLO. Your pictures were well drawn and you have a lot of talent!
Greetings Storm Hi my name is Avalon and l go to Panmure bridge school. l really like your blog post and it really got me thinking about something in my mind your descriptive writing is a great way of showing how you felt. l also like how you draw a photo of what you thought. Good job and great work
Greetings Storm, My name is Chavda and you may have not seen me comment on your blog. I really love your drawings it looks fantastic. Was it hard to do?
Hi Storm, What a great effort of work from you. I really like the pictures you've drawn. There abousolutly amazing. I think that you should add in your blurb what you've learnt in this DLO. When I read this is gave me a picture of a big castle with twins, that had pink hair. What was your favourite part about this activity? Great job Storm! and remeber to keep with the good blog posts.
Hello Storm My name is Zoe and I am a year 8 student from Karoro School.
You have made an amazing piece of work and I really like the pictures you've drawn. I think that you should add more information into you blurb, maybe about the castle as it is called “The Lost Castle” and there is nothing about the castle. When I read this, the twins with the pink hair stood out to me they were really cool. Keep up the good work
Greetings Storm,
ReplyDeleteYour post on the lost castle was excellent! As a year 7 I am really impressed on the amount of effort you put into the making of your DLO. Your pictures were well drawn and you have a lot of talent!
Greetings Storm
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Avalon and l go to Panmure bridge school. l really like your blog post and it really got me thinking about something in my mind your descriptive writing is a great way of showing how you felt. l also like how you draw a photo of what you thought.
Good job and great work
Greetings Storm,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Chavda and you may have not seen me comment on your blog. I really love your drawings it looks fantastic. Was it hard to do?
KEEP IT UP!!
Hi Storm, I found your work really interesting because The drawings you have created and the sentences were great. Well done!
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ReplyDeleteHi Storm,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great effort of work from you. I really like the pictures you've drawn. There abousolutly amazing. I think that you should add in your blurb what you've learnt in this DLO. When I read this is gave me a picture of a big castle with twins, that had pink hair. What was your favourite part about this activity? Great job Storm! and remeber to keep with the good blog posts.
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My name is Zoe and I am a year 8 student from Karoro School.
You have made an amazing piece of work and I really like the pictures you've drawn. I think that you should add more information into you blurb, maybe about the castle as it is called “The Lost Castle” and there is nothing about the castle. When I read this, the twins with the pink hair stood out to me they were really cool.
Keep up the good work
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ReplyDeleteHello Storm
ReplyDeleteGreat Story you have created. I think you are very creative in your writing and drawings.
Keep your efort up!!
thank you rebecca
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