Hi Storm, I am a student that attends Panmure Bridge School. I like this DLO you have created about you. I think you should add a commer instead on a fullstop between cars and and. I also think that and shouldn't have a capital letter since it is carring on a sentance. Maybe you could also have a blurb. But in total you've done a great job on your blog post. How did you make a love heart over a car?. Great effort!.
Hi Storm, my name is Ofa and I attend Panmure Bridge School. I have come along your blog and have seen your All About Me DLO. What kind of racing car would you have if you were to pick one?
Hi Storm
ReplyDeleteMy name is Nickaela and I attend Panmure Bridge School in Auckland. I really like that you like race cars as well. Keep up the good work
Hi Storm,
ReplyDeleteI am a student that attends Panmure Bridge School. I like this DLO you have created about you. I think you should add a commer instead on a fullstop between cars and and. I also think that and shouldn't have a capital letter since it is carring on a sentance. Maybe you could also have a blurb. But in total you've done a great job on your blog post. How did you make a love heart over a car?. Great effort!.
Hi Storm, my name is Ofa and I attend Panmure Bridge School. I have come along your blog and have seen your All About Me DLO. What kind of racing car would you have if you were to pick one?
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great Work!